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Context

The early Strange Tales issues predate the Marvel Universe. The Atlas brand yet had to become Marvel Comics. However, there are multiple Atlas stories who have been retroactively been made part of the Marvel Universe.

This was never the case of Paul Lorenze… but it could.

“The Beast” is the title of this 1951 story. Lorenze is not clearly called that in-text.


Background

  • Real Name: Paul Lorenze.
  • Marital Status: Presumed single.
  • Known Relatives: None.
  • Group Affiliation: None.
  • Base Of Operations: Unrevealed.
  • Height: 6’ Weight: 550 lbs.
  • Eyes: Brown Hair: Brown


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Powers & Abilities

Paul Lorenze has all of the characteristics of a particularly aggressive and uninhibited gorilla, with unusually large fangs.

Even as a human, he had an unusual level of physical strength and behavioural intensity.


History

Back in 1951, Paul Lorenze was a deranged student fascinated by the power of evil… and by apes.

He considered apes to be perfect. In his view they possessed great strength and ferocity unhindered by the moral sophistication plaguing humans. For Lorenze, that made apes capable of true evil.

His dearest wish was to become an ape, and know strength unfettered by morals.

The inevitable mad scientist

Lorenze was one of two students who were accidentally locked into a zoo at night.

There they stumbled upon another lunatic. Namely Professor Manheim, who had devised a serum to super-evolve apes into men.

Manheim was about to gun down the students who had witnessed his attempt to inject a gorilla. However, the weirdly charismatic Lorenze convinced him to devise an inverted variant of his serum. One that could turn a man into an ape.

(This being a 1951 story it is full of crass racism and terrible biology and zoology. It is also reminiscent of 1940s fare, such as the Golden Age Giganta).

Science without conscience

Kidnapping the other student, Manheim and Lorenze launched into a wild experiment. The process allowed Lorenze to reminisce past historical, then prehistorical incarnations.

Lorenze mutating into a beast

As he went back in time before the appearance of the Homo genus, he physically turned into a savage ape-like creature. This primate killed Manheim with one blow.

(As you likely know, great apes were a fixture of this era’s comics. You could thus tie the revoltin’ development of Lorenze becoming an ape to other gorilla-centric stories. Such as the gorilla curse.)

Gorilla fight

Somehow, the zoo gorilla whom Manheim had wanted to experiment on then found Manheim’s house. It attacked.

The bestial Lorenze eventually prevailed. But the other student had freed himself and defenestrated Lorenze from behind.

Handlers from the zoo, who were chasing the escaping gorilla, captured Lorenze instead. Somehow, they did not notice the difference. The bestial Lorenze thus ended up behind stout steel bars at the zoo.


Description

See illustration.


Personality

Lorenze was a crazy dude fond of :

  1. Mad science.
  2. Ranting about how only animals could know true evil that was sadly denied to men.

As an ape-like creature, he was apparently incapable of speech. It is unclear what level of intelligence he retained.


Quotes

“It’s the apes I admire ! They’re powerful, vicious… and evil ! I like all evil things… and brute force ! Look at that big fellow there… his tiny, mad eyes, the snarling lips, the tremendous power… He’s the embodiment of all the wicked things in man !”


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Lorenze as an ape

Dex: 02 Str: 05 Bod: 05 Motivation: Psycho
Int: 02 Wil: 02 Min: 02 Occupation: Captive
Inf: 03 Aur: 02 Spi: 02 Resources {or Wealth}: 000
Init: 008 HP: 005

Powers:
Analytical smell/tracking scent: 02, Density Increase: 01

Bonuses and Limitations:

  • Density Increase is Always On and Already Factored In.
  • AS/TS doesn’t have the tracking component.

Skills:
Acrobatics (Climbing): 03, Martial Artist (AV): 03

Advantages
Iron Nerves.

Connections:
None.

Drawbacks:
Strange Appearance, MPR (seemingly incapable of speech).


Design notes

As per our usual approach, these stats model what he’s actually seen doing.

If you want him to have more DEX and the like, go right ahead. You could always reason that Lorenze wasn’t used to his new body yet when he fought that gorilla.


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Lorenze as an ape — Averaged PL 3.8

STR STA AGL DEX FGT INT AWE PRE
04 03 02 00 02 -2 01 00

Powers

Evil ape body ● 2 points ● Descriptor: Zoological
– Senses 1 (Acute smell).
– Feature 1 (+3 bonus to Climbing rolls).

Combat Advantages

All-Out Attack, Defensive Roll 2.

Other Advantages

Fearless.

Skills

Close combat (Unarmed) 2 (+4), Insight 1 (+2), Perception 1 (+2)

Offense

Initiative +2
Unarmed +4, Close, Damage 4.

Defence

Dodge 02 Fortitude 07
Parry 02 Toughness 03*/05
Will 01

* Without Defensive Roll.

Complications

  • Primal evil Even worse than real estate.
  • Bestial appearance Lorenze looks like a scary killer beast.
  • Physical restriction He may be unable to form speech, at least early on.

Powers Levels

  • Trade-off areas. Attack/Effect PL 4, Dodge/Toughness PL 4, Parry/Toughness PL 4, Fort/Will PL 4.
  • Points total 32. Abilities 20, Defences 4, Skills 2, Powers 2, Devices 0, Advantages 4. Equiv. PL 3.

Notes

As per our usual approach, these stats model what he’s actually seen doing.

If you want him to have better Defenses, Offense and the like, go right ahead. You could always reason that Lorenze wasn’t used to his new body yet when he fought that gorilla.

By Sébastien Andrivet.

Source of Character: Strange Tales vol. 1 #1 (1951).

Helper(s): Darci.

Writeup completed on the 28th of September, 2014.

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